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Thursday, May 20, 2010

Sample Chapter

"Lorenzo are you ready to begin the attack,"says Jane. "Wait up a second, making sure I have all my gear" says Lorenzo packing up his gear for a attack, to end the war, to kill general Hawk and General v3.5 who are working together. Lace enters the room,"Hiya' Jane I finished on the new weapon made one for you and Lorenzo." "You mean the energy sword?" Asks Jane with excitement, "Yes!" answers Lace. Jane is now happy, "Thank you Lace" she hugs Lace. Lorenzo enters the the room. "Whooo am I missing something here" says Lorenzo. Then Lace tells Lorenzo he finished the energy sword, Lorenzo now says, "Awesome, that's amazing does it work." "Try it yourselves" says Lace, Lorenzo and Jane answer, "absolutely." Lorenzo and Jane try it out and like it then Lorenzo and Jane leave and prepare for battle.
They look for spots to attack both Generals. "You know I'm not pushing you, my grandfather is the one that died, Jane." "Thanks for the thought but, I made up my mind" says Jane. "Thanks, I really appreciate it Jane." "You know I've been thinking after all of this you want to well you know, settle down." "No way" says Jane. "Heh heh you know I really like you, you aren't afraid to do anything."Thanks" says Jane, "I like you a little to." They were about to kiss when they heard the Generals talking. Then they fell weird, Lorenzo says, "ummm aaahh lets hear what they are talking about." Jane shy says, "yea sure heh heh." Then the eavesdrop the generals. Then General Hawk says, "Well my good man, are the plans ready to kill the resistance."Yes" says General v3.5. "What about about the two assassins and your son do they know of our plan." General Hawk roars, "Don't talk bad about my son he is just confused" he relaxes and says, "The assassins don't know about our plan." Lorenzo whispers to Jane, "I never thought they would work together." General v3.5 heard that and said, "It looks like we have visitors, heh heh." Then Lorenzo and Jane put their hoods one and drop down in front of both generals.
"We know your plans to destroy every human, just so you can make a robot future."Says Jane. "And I know you two were the ones that killed all assassins, even my grandfather." Says Lorenzo. Then general Hawk says, "Yes we killed your grandfather we tared his limbs right off." Lorenzo started to get emotional, Jane fells bad for Lorenzo. Then General v3.5 says, " Yes we killed him but not in the bombing, this is how it happened." General v3.5 starts to tell the story of Mario Lorenzo's grandfather. "Your grandfather was a man that believed in justice for all, even criminals." says v3.5. "After the bombing your grandfather survived (barely) he spoke to me and Hawk here, he said." "The world is falling apart *cough* you causing this destruction *snuff* will make it worse." Hawk said, "Shut up, assassin! Your kind believes in peace *laughter* your assassins, no one likes you. You kill!" General v.3.5 speaks and said the last 3 words Mario heard, "riposa in pace." Then general v3.5 and Hawk put their knives in Mario heart. This is the end of the story. "You see we both killed Mario together." Lorenzo get full in rage and yells out, "vai morire generale!" In English means go die general. Then Lorenzo and Jane attack both the generals, for the fight of there lives!
Lorenzo takes out the energy sword while, Jane takes out a sword. Jane attacks Hawk and Lorenzo attacks General v3.5. Jane and Hawk cut and stab each other. While Lorenzo and v3.5 have a more technology fight. Jane and Hawk both are stuck in a sword lock and the swords break. Then Lorenzo and v3.5 are in a energy sword battle when the energy swords ran out. Then Lorenzo attacks Hawk and Jane attacks v3.5. Then General v3.5 says "Enough!" and was about to put a scar on Janes face but, instead in his Lorenzo. Then Lorenzo and Jane are on the flour and the generals stand tall. Then Lorenzo said "riposa in pace" and to hidden blade shout out and his the generals right in the neck. The one that his the generals exploded.
Lorenzo looks up in the sky and says, "questo e per te nonno." Then Lorenzo turns around and says, "Jane are you o" Jane kisses him. (5seconds) She said " I been whating to do that sence I met you." You means we could have been doing this all this time." The both laugh.
Then Lace became a 3 grade arts and crafts teacher, Lorenzo and Jane got marryed but, still did what they do best being the last of their kind, protector, being assassins. noi siamo assassini, per sempre fino a quando il mondo è in pace e tranquillità, l'ultimo dei nostri re, ma l'inizio di un nuovo tipo di assassini. Which means; We are assassins, for ever until the world is in complete peace, the last of our king but, the start of a new kind of assassins.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Novel Project = Plot outline/one page summary

The Novel I created is called "The Future Assassin." This story takes pace in Manhattan, New York at the year 2556 and further. The main characters are; Lorenzo, Mario, General Hawk, Quick Kill (Jane), The General v3.5, and Lace. The genres of my novel is action, blood/gore, and romance. The theme of my novel is revenge of a assassin. This novel I created will make you cry when Lorenzo's grandfathers dies and Lorenzo whats revenge. Lorenzo whats revenge from the robots or humans that made the bombing, that killed every assassin. Lorenzo doesn't know that Quick Kill (Jane) is still alive and she is a assassin. So in the novel both of the assassin's work together to get revenge for they are the last of the assassins.
"The Future Assassin"

I. Introduction
a. New York 2556 in the fall.
b. Lorenzo, Mario, General Hawk, Quick Kill (Jane), The General v3.5, and Lace.
c. Lorenzo will meet all of the main characters.

II. Rising Action
a. Lorenzo is the main main character and the one that wants justice and revenge(26 years old). Mario is Lorenzo uncle and one of the last assassins and died by a bombing. General Hawk is the military general, and loves to destroy robots, that his scientist created, but went wrong. Quick Kill is the last assassin and she is a girl also Lorenzo and Jane (Quick Kill) have a love relationship during the story. The General v3.5 is the main robot and loves to kill ALL HUMANS! Lace is the general's son and follows his dad's footsteps.
b. Lorenzo wants revenge and justice for whoever killed his grandfather, Mario. Mario only wanted peace in the world. General Hawk wants to kill all robots. Jane (Quick Kill) wants to help Lorenzo because she fells his pain. The General v3.5 wants to kill all humans. Lace does whatever the general does, even if it's wrong.

III. Climax
a. The most important part of this story is when Lorenzo and Jane face General Hawk and General v3.5 in a epic battle.
b. The big turning point of a character in win Lace starts helping Lorenzo and Jane and becomes their mechanic man.

IV. Falling Action
a. When Lorenzo and Jane face off General Hawk and General v3.5. Let's just say in the end there will be a ending that might surprise some people, will might surprise everyone reading my novel.
b. Half of the characters are dead while the other's aren't dead but living happily ever after.

V. Resolution
a. Lorenzo learns that the world is full of may gifts and that he found his true love. Even if they ( you should know if read the novel) have many fights they are in love. Jane gets the same thing Lorenzo gets because, they like each other. Jane is Lorenzo's true love. Lace learns to work for arts and crafts with kids. Mario is now happy in death.
b. Lorenzo will marry Jane and will stay assassin's till' death. Lace becomes a 3 grade teacher for arts and crafts but, secretly works with Lorenzo and Jane in missions.

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Novel Project = Character biography

Lorenzo Auditore, was born in July 7, 2556. At his time the world was at war, it was a fight robots versus humans. His ancestor's are Assassins the fought with the Assassin Order, he didn't find out until later, in his life. He was not a normal kid, his mom died when she gave birth. Lorenzo father was a assassin and never came back in a assassination attempt of the robot leader, before Lorenzo was born. Lorenzo lived with is grandfather, Mario Auditore the 19th who used to be a assassin. Lorenzo didn't go to school all he did is train, to be a assassin. Lorenzo trained with knives and guns at the age of eight. He never asked Mario why he trained, Lorenzo just did it, and Mario was proud. When Lorenzo turned eighteen he became, a assassin. When the assassin order had a the first meeting Lorenzo forgot. He was with his girlfriend, it was his first one and he was nineteen. In the meeting there was a bombing and every assassin died accept for Lorenzo. Lorenzo was mad because, one of the assassins was his grandfather Mario. He put found his father's assassin armor and sleeked out so destroy the machines and any human in his way. This shows that Lorenzo is courageous, serious, and dangerous.

Friday, April 30, 2010

Novel Project = Research

1st source = Leonardo da Vinci
2nd source = Ezio Auditore da Firenze

1st source facts;
1. He was educated in his father's house getting a elementary education of reading, writing and arithmetic.
2. In 1467 he became an apprentice learning painting, sculpture and technical and mechanical skills.
3. In the year 1477 Leonardo was all ready sketching on pumps, military weapons and other machines.
4. Although he always wanted to paint but could not because , mathematical studies kept him away from his painting much of the time.
5. Leonardo spent most of his time arranging and editing his scientific studies, this means he was 1,000 years ahead in life, because he even made planes.

2nd source facts;
1. Ezio Auditore da Firenze was born in Florence in 1459 AD, the second son of Giovanni and Maria Auditore.
2. Until the age of 17, Ezio lived a life of luxury as a member of the Florentine noble class, unaware of his father's allegiance to the Assassin Order.(click assassin order to see what they are for Ezio and the assassin order are real)
3. In the year 1476, Ezio, his older brother Federico and friends of the family got into a fight with Vieri de' Pazzi and his gang.
4.Ezio then becomes a assassin when his father died.
5. Two more years passed before word of the Templar vessel reached Ezio once again on his twenty ninth birthday, when Rosa brought him a shipping manifest detailing the return of the ship that very day. Sneaking into the Arsenal, Ezio watched as a Templar soldier carrying a Piece of Eden disembarked from the ship and made his way to a Templar base in the city. Following the soldier, Ezio assassinated and impersonated the guard, carrying the Piece of Eden to a meeting with Rodrigo Borgia himself. Finally able to confront the man ultimately responsible for the deaths of his father and brothers, Ezio criticized the Templar Grand Master for the non-appearance of the supposed "prophet" detailed in the Codex prophecy. Borgia responded, proudly naming himself the prophet before engaging Ezio in battle. The battle was short, and Ezio easily bested the Templar. On the backfoot, Borgia called upon the city guards and taunted the Assassin, saying that "his people" had failed to show up.

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

pompeii













WELLCOME TO THE STREETS OF POMPEII

Introduction of Pompeii

Pompeii was a city that was destroyed by I volcano called, Mount Vesuvius, in 79 A.D. This is a gorsier on the street of Pompeii. The city is located near the Naples; Romans were the on ones in the city. People today found the city and it was located 66ft under the earths’ current surface. This city was destroyed in August 79 A.D. More than 2,500,000 visitors each year you are just one of them. Well now let is began our tour of the streets of Pompeii.

Why the Pompeii streets so interesting?






Some of you may be thinking “Why are the Pompeii streets so interesting, I mean they are just streets.” Well to me streets that are over 1900 years old are pretty important don’t you think. Along Pompeii's streets you will find stepping stones. Pompeian’s used them as a 'bridge' when there were floads or just to cross the streets. In the floor near them you can see the signs left by the wheels of the wagons. Also the Pompeii streets were organized by a grid pattern that made it easy for someone to go place to place.

Feet were very important in Pompeii? (What does that mean?)

No muddy feet for the people of Pompeii, they had paved (cover with a material such as stone or concrete to make suitable for vehicle traffic) streets! With curbs, and sidewalks! The material used for the pavers was usually very durable (strong) and also extremely slippery when wet. The streets were raised in middle and sidewalks slanted towards the street to allow rainwater and waste materials to channel (go through) into the gutters formed by high curbs. Stepping stones placed at convenient intervals (a set of containing all points) kept feet dry and away from any unpleasant muck (sludge) left by cart-hauling animals. Wheels from these carts all of uniform axle width wore ruts into the stones over time, which helped keep them on the straight and narrow. Some of these tracks may even have been carved, into the stone as a safety procaution.

The main street of the famous Pompeii!

Via Consolare was one of the main streets of the town of Pompeii and it connected the forum with the street that connected Pompeii with the town of Ercolanum (now called Ercolano). Along its sides you can see many shops, houses and villas. You can also see a well and many taverns. So this is like the Manhattan of Pompeii because, it has everything in it.

Well this is the end of the tour of Pompeii any questions please asked me Jesus Cruz your personal guide well see ya later. Watch out for mt.vesuvius might get you just like it did to Pompeii.

Thursday, April 15, 2010

HW#117

Sherlock Holmes written by Sir Arther Conan Doyle is a intersting book. the story takes place in cities. The main charcters are Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Waston.

Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Waston were always solving cases Dr. Waston was Sherlock Holmes right hand man. They shared rooms together. Soon after those years Dr. Waston got married and tured those cases into adventures. Soon Waston's wife dies. Waston was walking by London when he saw he was on Baker Street. The date was March 20, 1888. He looked up and he saw Holmes on the second floor window working hard on a case. Dr. Waston went upstairs to say Hi to Holmes. A stanger came to the house and gave Holmes and Waston a case so they start off to investgate.

At the end of this case took a long time Holmes thought he solved the case but then he saw a letter that was for him. Fooled by Mrs. Irene Norton. Sherlock Holmes is hired by a retired art supply dealer fromLewisham, Josiah Amberley, to look into his wife’s disapearance. She has left with a neighbour. Holmes is too busy with another case at the time. So he sent Waston to see want is going on. Waston followed Josiah's daughter and found somthing and tooled Sherlock Holmes. Amberley’s alibi fell apart when Holmes discovered that his seat at theHaymarket Theatre had not been busy on the night in question, its number went down from the ticket that Watson had seen. Also, the painting was a clue. Holmes realizd that it was being done to mask a smell, and he soon discovered what that was gas. He found a gas pipe leading into the strongroom with a tap outside. Amberley had lured his wife and her lover for so he had believed Dr. Ernest to be — into the strongroom, locked them in, and turned the gas on, killing them out of jealousy. He had simply hidden the “stolen” valuables somewhere. In indelible can not erase pencil, one of the victims wrote “We we”,meaning to write “We were murdered.”

HW#116

The Last Invisible Boy written by Evan Kuhlman,is a sad and happy story.The story takes place in sunnyvile.The main characters are Finn,Derek,mom,dad,and Melanie.

It started in a day, that Finn saw his hair getting white.His mom did not worry to much about it.Finn name means fair hero.Finn dad died in a plane no one knows how.Derek Finn's brother thinks the white hair is cool.Finn saw he was getting more white he was turning,invisible.But he did not worry about it.

Finn went to the docter and he did not have a virus nothing.Finn did not go to school for 4 weeks.He had a friend named Melanie that they both like each other.They are planning to have kids someday but for now they are just friends.Everyone thinks there boyfriend and girlfriend in their school.Weeks passed Finn's face is turning more white,everyone is school sometimes called him a freak.In about 6 weeks he was all clear white no black hair.

Finn always goes to the cemetery to visit his dead dad.He always sad day and night sometimes.Melanie one time kissed Finn, and told him that was a cure to turn you back to normal.Now Derek and Finn always see MLB because their dad use to see it.One night Finn was done taking a shower, and looked at himself in the mirror.He was turning back to normal, he saw black hair and his skin was punk again.In the morning Derek and mom were happy to see Finn back to normal.Melanie was happy and Finn was very happy as well.

In conclusion and reccomned this book 10 out of 10.It is a sad than happy sorry.It shows the hppy and fun parts.Than it shows the sad and not so fun parts.The book is a heartbreaking book.